Here are the first pieces of writing done this term by students in my year 9 German class. Please choose a piece of work to read from the names listed below. Remember that you are reading 'real' work done by 'real' students. Imagine the sort of feedback you would like to receive on your work and then give your feedback by posting a comment in the following way using the "Two stars and a wish" formula: Hello + name of student's work read. Two things I thought were good about this piece of work were...... One thing I think would have made it better .......... Alles Gute, your name.
Now click on any of these links to read someone's work.
Download Adam.doc , Download Alban.doc , Download Carolina.doc , Download Cem.doc , Download Chloe.doc Download Chris.doc , Download David.doc , Download Duncan.doc Download Georgia.doc , Download Holly.doc Download Jade.doc , Download Jaime.doc Download Jess.doc , Download Josh.doc Download Kitty.doc , Download Laura.doc , Download Matt.doc Download Melissa.doc , Download Rachel.doc Download Rebecca.doc , Download Rose.doc Download Sam.doc , Download Sophie.doc , Download SophieB.doc , Download Stephen.doc ,Download Tim.doc
